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at the end,
all that is left is the feeling.
when you've spent the last minutes waiting,
when the last set of doors finally open
and you're winding your way through lowlit hallways
rushing towards the ending you only wish you could avoid,
all that is left is the feeling.
it's that set of dreams and
that set of
half-concocted theories
about how it all could work out.
how you wish you could walk down narrow
brightly lit streets late at night
and sit on benches and
live inside the moment.
hold your breath.
just one moment longer.
don't let go of it.
hold onto the feeling.
05.22.12
all that is left is the feeling.
when you've spent the last minutes waiting,
when the last set of doors finally open
and you're winding your way through lowlit hallways
rushing towards the ending you only wish you could avoid,
all that is left is the feeling.
it's that set of dreams and
that set of
half-concocted theories
about how it all could work out.
how you wish you could walk down narrow
brightly lit streets late at night
and sit on benches and
live inside the moment.
hold your breath.
just one moment longer.
don't let go of it.
hold onto the feeling.
05.22.12
Something scribbled out late last night. Hope you like.
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yesssss. love it. It flows smoothly. And I especially love how you ended it, so when I read it out loud, it kind of had that "suffocating" feeling to it, like holding your breath because of how short the sentences are. It's beautiful ♥.