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Escape


Splashing through a dark blue dream
Feeling a turquoise breeze
And a gaze from your dark green eyes

Listen to the voice
Escaping through your lips
Watch your beautiful smile
While we talk here for a long while

Escape away
Together we will stay
And the end will never appear
To grow near…


02.28.06
©2006-2009 ~Telestic
:icontelestic:

Author's Comments

written over the course of two nights. guess it just need a mite more inspiration before it would fully bloom. i think i like this a lot. good to finally get something out that i feel good about : ]

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:iconwymen:
How do you manage to put into words what I'm feeling?
Crazy I say.
Anyway I really like this, bue (there's always a but) with the second stanza romoving the "long" in the last line makes it flow easier. It does change the meaning slightly though. Entirely up to you!
I do aprove tho! It shall be fav'd

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Alcohol is the anesthesia by which we endure the operation of Life
:icontelestic:
thanks! i'll take a look at the suggested changes! im glad u liked it and thanks for the fav! : ]
:iconkyobunny:
aww thats sweet! you must have someone in mind if you were so specific with the details!! <3

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and so it goes, and so it goes
and you're the only one who knows
:icontelestic:
:love: oh yes haha ive got someone in mind : ]
:iconkyobunny:
awwwww!! ^.^

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and so it goes, and so it goes
and you're the only one who knows

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