Escape
Splashing through a dark blue dream
Feeling a turquoise breeze
And a gaze from your dark green eyes
Listen to the voice
Escaping through your lips
Watch your beautiful smile
While we talk here for a long while
Escape away
Together we will stay
And the end will never appear
To grow near…
02.28.06














Comments
Crazy I say.
Anyway I really like this, bue (there's always a but) with the second stanza romoving the "long" in the last line makes it flow easier. It does change the meaning slightly though. Entirely up to you!
I do aprove tho! It shall be fav'd
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Alcohol is the anesthesia by which we endure the operation of Life
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and so it goes, and so it goes
and you're the only one who knows
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and so it goes, and so it goes
and you're the only one who knows
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